I didn't like this style of writing at all, it didn't flow well, it seemed to flip from one 'scene' to another too quickly, everything was rushed and assumed, for example: what sort of detective, would find a vial in someone's desk, know instantly it was poison, and tell the nephew his uncle would spend a long time in prison, not to mention, that the previous day it was established that C.O.D could only be natural. Books can be fantasy, but they still need to make sense in 'real world' situations. This book was stilted, simplistic, and the characters were one dimensional. If I hadn't checked up on this author before downloading this book, I would have assumed it was an early attempt at writing. Not finished.

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Mrs. S. A. Jago

Not for me

Commenté au Royaume-Uni le 9 mars 2021

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Normally love Sandi Lynn books but this one was a bit too far fetched, I just don’t believe we can see and talk to dead people or see the future. I know it’s a love story and not strictly true but not for me this time, sorry. X

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Aye jay

so much potential….

Commenté en Australie le 19 septembre 2021

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I really liked the premise of this book and about 30% of the way through I was super excited…. Then about half way through it was like the author got a bit bored with it, stuff started to feel rushed and didn’t hang together properly in terms of the h and H. I was ok with suspending disbelief on the h’s abilities and even on how the police managed to do their jobs at lightning speed based on stuff all evidence but the lack of character development bugged me, one minute everyone was feeling a certain way and then literally minutes later total about face. I still enjoyed it but felt like it could have been so much more

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diantm

Review

Commenté aux États-Unis le 6 janvier 2022

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Editing editing editing -very distracting. This should never be an issue regardless , that it was a free read. Thanks

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