So the plot and the characters are better than many of the other mob stories I’ve read. There needs to be editing done to this. Also, more polish words need to be sprinkled throughout for flavor. I liked the alpha, he doesn’t seem to get off on hurting her. He enjoys that she enjoys it. The plot needs a little work. Motivation for the marriage isn’t explained. Why now? What did her father do to push it? Same with the accident. Why did her father do what he did. It isn’t fully clear and her response is disjointed. After spending the day crying she goes confront him. I would believe it more if she rushed from the detective to her father. Lots of potential for this author.

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3 stars

Commenté aux États-Unis le 8 juin 2021

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I seldom buy a book that has under 200 pages. I like to live in my books and I find it impossible to become captivated by a story that has 176 pages. In my opinion most of these short stories are forgettable. I didn’t dislike the book but I didn’t love it. Not enough depth in story or characters. If you are someone who enjoys a mafia/dark story and aren’t interested in investing the time in a real book you should enjoy this book. I call these books an afternoon read by the pool or beach.

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It was okay

Commenté aux États-Unis le 25 décembre 2021

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Just okay for me. Could've been better in my opinion. But once the instalove happened with no real connection between the characters, I just didn't have any more interest. And the end was very unbelievable. A bodyguard let's her go guns blazing? Not realistic with her situation. The beginning was good..had me hooked, then things started to fall apart for me.

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Alexciz

Good story

Commenté aux États-Unis le 14 octobre 2021

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I liked the premise and thought it had a good plot. The relationship between the characters wasn’t believable however, there was no character growth. Overall a decent quick read. My 1st book by this author, not sure yet if I’ll read another…

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Brattytemptation

Not the best

Commenté aux États-Unis le 23 octobre 2021

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Too much like the other stories she has written. There was little difference in this than others. Very disappointed. Normally I would not have finished the story.

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Kindle Customer

3.5 stars

Commenté aux États-Unis le 14 mai 2021

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This was a good story, not much depth but otherwise still a good short read. The characters were likeable but very predictable storyline.

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