Saisissez votre téléphone portable ou votre adresse e-mail
En cliquant sur « Envoyer le lien », vous acceptez les Conditions d'utilisation d'Amazon.
Vous acceptez de recevoir un SMS automatique d'Amazon ou en son nom à propos de l'application Kindle sur votre numéro de téléphone portable ci-dessus. Le consentement n'est pas une condition d'achat. Des frais de messages et de données peuvent s'appliquer.
Natural Magic (The Last Magus Book 1) (English Edition) Format Kindle
Détails sur le produit
- ASIN : B094ZP8TBQ
- Langue : Anglais
- Taille du fichier : 1039 KB
- Utilisation simultanée de l'appareil : Illimité
- Synthèse vocale : Activée
- Lecteur d’écran : Pris en charge
- Confort de lecture : Activé
- X-Ray : Activé
- Word Wise : Activé
- Nombre de pages de l'édition imprimée : 292 pages
- Classement des meilleures ventes d'Amazon : 30,236 en Boutique Kindle (Voir les 100 premiers en Boutique Kindle)
- Commentaires client :
Meilleurs commentaires provenant d’autres pays
Character description was bland and generic; I don't know what many of them looked like beyond things like "long blond hair", or "short white beard". Which is odd as the locales were well described.
The pacing was off. Like, way off. I would say approx 50% of the book is a training montage, and right after the initial inciting incident the plot progression stalls massively. You can feel the places where the author is trying to make something "mysterious" but then the topic gets dropped. It's gameLit so the equivalent would be quest flags that get ignored.
The romance is... weird. I got tricked into shipping the MC with his long lost male elf friend whom he's been obsessing over for 5 years! Said friend returns, and appears to be jealous whenever the MC hugs anyone other than him... only to have have MC fall for the first woman he sees and has more than 1 day interaction with. And nothing is ever said of his 5 year man-crush again from either party, even though he fully admits knowing sweet F all about women, and barely understanding romantic feelings other that his friendships (hint hints 5 year man-crush) since he grew up as a monk.Colour me confused. Im not surprised if he is either to be fair, but its the instant switching that makes it weird.
There were some minor spelling/grammar checks, and a huge missed opportunity with the House/Hall of doors/many doors NOT being a running gag that everyone called it something else but only MC could tell. I thought that would have been hilarious anyway.
Final nail in the coffin though; the magic system in this magic story is soo under cooked it literally makes no sense. If the most powerful mage in this world can't coherently explain how magic works then Alec... you in danger boy. MC in addition to having non-explained ridiculous magic is also a Gary stu who gets handed OP magic artifacts like candy from almost everyone... including the worlds God! This is right at the beginning before we even begin the 50% training montage I might add.
Conclusion; it reads like the opening few hours of a JRPG, complete with random side quest flags that get ignored, God gifted gear that you can't take off for the entire game and a main plot which won't make sense until (presumably) the next installation i.e the 2nd book. But unfortunately I won't continue.
Alec an orphan has magical powers not seen in an age, all he has to do is learn to use them! Along with an elf girl who is the last of her line, they learn to use elemental magic.
Looking forward to book 2. Hopefully the Zon fix their Bs before then.