Spoiler ahead because this book annoyed me so much.
West just forgives his ex for sleeping with his brother????? The forgiveness happens in about one paragraph. Why bother having it be a storyline if you're not going to even build it up properly or give it a proper ending?
They undercut the tension with Ezra constantly saying "but I'm such a goooood person, I can't be a villain, I'm the main character of the next book!"
You don't need to think about these books. The authors have spelled out every detail of their emotions. "I'm happy, I'm sad, I'm horny." Show, don't tell, guys. It's, like, rule number one they teach you in high school English classes.
Honestly, bring back the heavy drinking college students because this book was twee and full of bratty kids.
It was like the authors read "cliche 101" for the kids. At one stage a nine-year-old is too incompetent to pour cereal into a bowl and breaks it, which of course leads to tantrums and people walking on broken glass. My eyes nearly rolled out of my head. The kids are spoiled brats and it is boring and infuriating to read - I nearly DNF'd several times. When the kids should be told , "yes, I know you're grieving but stop being a brat and behave!" They instead get told," I'm so sorry you're inconvenienced, let me - a grown adult - stop having any semblance of a normal life or having any adults to talk to so you don't get upset." I don't get what the authors were trying to achieve with this or why they thought it'd be a good storyline.
The books redeeming features are at least the main characters are old enough for a long term relationship unlike the 21-year-olds falling in love in previous ones.
Oh, and there were no typos.
But the annoying kids who remove all the momentum and interest from the story.
I liked the first few books - really really liked books 2 & 3 - but this one was just bad bad bad.
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